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Answer for Online SSB PPDT Story Writing Practice Set -6

Attempted By : devasenaAnswered on : 23 Dec 2017
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1 kumar was keen in studies right from his childhood and he want to help the poor people and orphans. He studied well and got job in reputed company and become one of the top most engineers. On this occasion,he went to the orphange and there he gave food,dresses and books for the children. In this picture,we saw kumar is in orphange and supplying food to the children.One of the childrens came towards him and told him that they were very thankful and greateful to have those things and he went,Kumar return home by feeling happy satisfaction and from then onwards one sunday of every month he contributes some money and spends his time with them from morning to evening and he becomes inspiration to his friends also.

Ananlysis

Concept of helping orphanage children is good but story needs improvement. Never write explicitly as "in this picture kumar is distributing sweet" etc. Just write a story and don't describe the picture. Also by merely distributing food and books, Kumar the hero of the PPDT story has not done any overwhelming job. It would have been better if you had written that Kumar after becoming successful, used to visit the orphanage weekly and educate the children for better future.
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